Which revision should be made to the placement of sentence 11?

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Sentence 1As soon as the seedlings are shipped, we will notify you of their expected arrival time.

Which revision should be made to the placement of sentence 11?
A . remove sentence 11
B . move sentence 11 to follow sentence 8
C . move sentence 11 to follow sentence 12
D . move sentence 11 to follow sentence 14
E . no revision is necessary

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Answer: E