Which revision should be made to the placement of sentence 11?

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Sentence 1I can be reached at home (213) 239-8206 after 5:00 P.M., or you may leave a message on my answering machine or e-mail.

Which revision should be made to the placement of sentence 11?
A . remove sentence 11
B . move sentence 11 to the beginning of paragraph A
C . move sentence 11 to the end of paragraph A
D . move sentence 11 to the beginning of paragraph B
E . no revision is necessary

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Answer: E